First thought from screenshot: The pure blue trim looks great. The expanded egypt_soc set is so much better than default.

First thought on entering map: The wind sound is way too damn loud.

This map is really stressful to play on for me. Tracking you opponent is very important because if you lose them, you'll probably be slaughtered before you can find them again. The upper level is too powerful because of easily spammable rockets and grenades in the center. The good weapons are really unbalanced toward the upper levels, and while you may try to go low to get health, that just lets your opponent get up and rain death on you.
Weapons need to be rebalanced IMO

The teleporter/jumppads look nice, that's a clever trick.

The only detailing suggestion I have is to make the top border more interesting than just a grey band. The ruins look okay. The wind suggests they've been worn away by time, so they wouldn't be very jagged.

fast notices - wrote while looking.

jumppad / teleport thing is great. not sure if it fits in the theme but who cares..

anyway you could have played better with lights. Increasing fog distance, lowering the ambient and the main light and powering up the other lights would create a cooler atmosphere to me; right now it looks too pale. Some color scheme won't kill you too..

the gameplay lacks of ramps and ways to go up [3 jumps on those crates is a suicide, takes ages to get you up] and of a proper arena, still uncertain if it's good or bad. needs to be tested.

imo is way too little; ok, you have the space to run and jump but you get nowhere and following the "paths" you gave players will end up stucked on a wall.. mmh.. you can still say they would be killed before..

some more details would have been apreciated; the sand in the lower part can be "betterized" pulling it up and giving some nice "up-down" look upon the texture. Even some blends for the ruined parts could be good.

Nice map. Very interesting layout, weapon placement could really be improved though, as Meaninglez already stated.

Some small things:
1. Please reduce the sound.
2. There is a terrain fail next to the yellow armour.
3. That hanging block at the top of that hole in the wall (right over the ground) is physically just impossible. Why isn't it falling down?
4. The clipping of the floor looks strange, playermodels float over the ground.
5. The detailing is somehow unbalanced. Some walls are really worn down, whereas others look brandnew. What about "breaking" it all a little more (also the floor)?

The screenshot might not be updated, the map sure is!

Layout

I prefer bigger maps or at least more room to move around. I find myself constantly bumping into walls or other obstacles.
As stated above from another playtester, there are some walkways but thats it. What I found out, is that there aren't that much possibilities to combine platforms to evade or attack.
On some spots, like the wooden plank, you have to

There are also some dead-ends that really take out the flow and it takes some time to get out.

You can actually get stuck in this corner. Only the recoil of shooting can get you out.
Overall very bumpy and taking away just a few stones might make the layout already a bit more playable.

I always try to make my maps foolproof. So when someone falls down somewhere, he can still proceed with a rather penaltyfree flowy run.
Not sure if you agree with this.

Clip

You are a bit inconsequent on using clip.
some of the rim is not no-clipped on its edges, shown here:

Sometimes you used clip in a rounded corner but only on the floor, Grenades can get stuck there. Not sure if this is an issue.

Theme

It seems to me that there is no specific theme, other than egypt for the sake of having an egypt themed map.
This goes also for the name. (I know I have made no particular better job in this before yet, except on tempest) The map or the name tell no story about the future or past of this place.

There is no special thing that could make me remember the map. Something outstanding, like monuments in the backgrounds or similar things that I havn't seen before.
Even the map complex has its small outstanding detail that shows what the map could be possibly about (the small radio tower/satellite dish)

You missed the opportunity to match the terrain to the skybox. Having similar spiky vague mountains in the background would be a nice addition and differ the map in theme from any other one. There are some special effects that I love, like these jumppad fade-out "lights" that are actually textures. Would love to see something like that as a static particle. But with cubes and textures you are way more flexible. Would love to see this on a more foggy map.

To add a bit of variation, I would actually like to see that the walls are not always the same height. You did a great job there on the inner walls.

Lighting
Previous posters told you already anything about lighting.

Terrain
Something that really annoys me is that the sand almost never overlaps with the crates, stairs or walls. Not even with the jumppad.
Just a small detail I take care about.

Additional: I like the thoroughly texturized rims. No mistakes in these little details.

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I rate this as a rather simple map with a few innovations like the fade-out texture. Also the nice sound effects (beside the wind).
It feels like a more modern ot but not so fastpaced.

Overall a 7/10

The only thing I have to add is that some of the blocks sticking out from the wall you can stand on, like the one by the boxes you can climb by the plank. Others, like the one on the central dividing wall are noclipped but it looks like you could jump onto them.

Also, it is not clear at all where clipping starts around the top of the map. I can jump up on top of the walls, but then I arbitrarily cannot move further. I understand that this is to restrain gameplay and it's difficult to realistically stop players, but some sort of indication would be nice.
What brought this up for me: If you try to jump from the wall top between the center and YA rooms to the wall dividing the center and GA room (or vis-versa) you can hit the corner of the clipping and be unable to complete the jump. If you could make that a diagonal with skytextured geometry instead of a hard corner, it would feel a little less restrictive because it wouldn't impede movement (as much)

Personally I think the Egyptian theme is a bit overdone in Sauerbraten, that aside it's a good map. I know that sounds pretty general but that's just how I feel about it as a whole. Something that bothered me, though was the way some of the blocks are tilted to look all destroyed. It just looks kind of forced, like someone was trying to make it look destroyed. Subtlety is key when making artificial wear and tear, gotta make it look like it just fell into place that way. Also the way some of the boxes are staggered so that they don't all line up looks a little funny. Anyway, just my opinion.